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Overhaul the ‘War on Disease’ landing page to a structured, ten-part narrative that clearly presents the strategy, from a compelling hero section through problem framing, solution design, financial model, bribery strategy, proof points, objections handling, and governance safeguards to a concise call to action and supporting appendix.

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  • Introduce a hero section with bold hook and key statistics to frame the value proposition
  • Divide content into ten clear sections (Hook, Problem, Solution, Financial Engine, Bribery Strategy, Proof & Precedents, Objections, Security & Governance, Call to Action, Appendix)
  • Detail the 1% Treaty and DIH model with Victory bonds financing phases for investors, citizens, politicians, and contractors
  • Add robust Objections & Responses section to preempt skepticism and explain political, legal, and technical feasibility
  • Embed comprehensive Security & Governance mechanisms using DAO controls, AI fraud detection, and transparency guarantees
  • Include a clear Call to Action and Appendix with referendum guidance, legal compliance, roadmap, and risk mitigations

mikepsinn and others added 13 commits September 4, 2025 13:44
…directing military spending towards disease eradication, introducing a dynamic hero section and clarifying the 1% Treaty proposal
…timal structure, financial engine, and co-opting military contractors, enhancing clarity on the 1% Treaty and addressing objections with factual rebuttals
…eamlining the narrative and focusing on historical precedents to strengthen the case for the 1% Treaty
…se landing page, reinforcing key arguments against reliance on philanthropy and the need for military spending reallocation to enhance clarity and impact
… emphasizing personal financial alignment and addressing critical legal compliance issues to strengthen the case for military spending reallocation
…ns regarding legal compliance and verification at scale, introducing detailed solutions and reinforcing the proposal's viability through expert oversight and proven technologies
…ctions related to legality, financial risk, execution, geopolitical, and ethical concerns, providing comprehensive responses and mitigation strategies to reinforce the proposal's integrity and viability
…of resource misallocation, outline the existential choice humanity faces, and present a comprehensive 5-step plan for redirecting military spending towards disease eradication, reinforcing the proposal's viability and urgency
…nsolidating the rationale for redirecting military spending, introducing a comprehensive 5-step plan, and reinforcing the proposal's effectiveness through proven efficiency gains and political mobilization strategies
…el of VICTORY bonds, emphasizing the dual principles of target returns and mission guarantees, while detailing the societal and captured dividends from redirecting military spending towards health initiatives
… and anti-corruption framework, detailing multi-layered defenses against fraud and emphasizing the vision for transparent governance and efficient public institutions
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This PR restructures the War on Disease landing page into a coherent ten-part framework, replacing the old freeform narrative with clearly labeled sections (I–X). It enriches the hero, problem, and solution segments, embeds a detailed financial engine and bribery strategy, and introduces dedicated Objections, Security & Governance, and Appendix sections to streamline reader engagement and clarify implementation.

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Reorganized landing page into a clear ten-part structure
  • Introduced Optimal Landing Page Structure header
  • Defined sections I through X with titles and summaries
  • Removed old 60-second plan block
strategy/warondisease-landing.md
Expanded and reformatted Hero section
  • Added Hook & Value Proposition section
  • Included visual impact prompt and key statistic bullet list
  • Formatted hero text design notes and dynamic list
strategy/warondisease-landing.md
Refined Problem and Solution narratives
  • Updated problem statistics and context with new comparisons
  • Clarified the 1% Treaty and DIH solution model
  • Condensed existing narrative into 'The Problem' and 'The Solution' sections
strategy/warondisease-landing.md
Detailed Financial Engine and VICTORY bond mechanics
  • Introduced VICTORY bonds bootstrap funding model
  • Defined Target Return and Mission Guarantee principles
  • Outlined DIH treasury efficiency metrics
strategy/warondisease-landing.md
Outlined Bribery Strategy and stakeholder phases
  • Divided stakeholders into five phases (seed investors to contractors)
  • Specified bribes and incentives for each group
  • Linked phases to governance and funding flow
strategy/warondisease-landing.md
Added Objections, Security & Governance, and Appendix
  • Consolidated objections with succinct rebuttals
  • Inserted multi-layered security and DAO governance details
  • Appended call to action steps and implementation roadmap
strategy/warondisease-landing.md

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Hey there - I've reviewed your changes - here's some feedback:

  • The landing page content is very comprehensive but feels overwhelming—consider consolidating repetitive sections and moving deep-dive details into separate linked docs to keep the page concise and action-oriented.
  • The current hero copy and tone (e.g., “bribe the shit out of humanity”) may alienate some audiences; consider refining the language for professionalism while retaining the provocative edge.
  • It would help to surface key call-to-actions (investment, referendums, partnership links) higher in the page so readers see the next steps before diving into the appendix.
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## Overall Comments
- The landing page content is very comprehensive but feels overwhelming—consider consolidating repetitive sections and moving deep-dive details into separate linked docs to keep the page concise and action-oriented.
- The current hero copy and tone (e.g., “bribe the shit out of humanity”) may alienate some audiences; consider refining the language for professionalism while retaining the provocative edge.
- It would help to surface key call-to-actions (investment, referendums, partnership links) higher in the page so readers see the next steps before diving into the appendix.

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…ge, outlining immediate actions for potential supporters, including investment opportunities, signing the global referendum, and partnership options
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@mikepsinn mikepsinn merged commit 149f596 into decentralized-fda:master Sep 5, 2025
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