Merge pull request #2 from loopandlearn/draft-docs

Update from mentor review

Author: marionbarker

docs/index.md

@@ -49,9 +49,9 @@ The *LoopFollow* app will run on any iPhone or iPad that supports iOS 16.6 or ne
 
 ### Community Support and Build Help
 
-Community support for *LoopFollow* is available on [*LoopFollow*’s facebook page](https://www.facebook.com/groups/loopfollowlnl). Please use community support for Build problems. It is very unlikely that a new Issue needs to be opened when you are having trouble building. 
+Community support for *LoopFollow* is available on [*LoopFollow*’s FaceBook page](https://www.facebook.com/groups/loopfollowlnl). Please use community support for Build problems. It is very unlikely that a new Issue needs to be opened when you are having trouble building. 
 
-Remember, for build help with Browser Build, only your *LoopFollow* URL is needed. Just exchange your github address for `docs-test` in the example below:
+Remember, for build help with Browser Build, all we need is the *GitHub* URL to your own fork of *LoopFollow*. Just replace `docs-test` in the example below with your *GitHub* username:
 
 * Example: [https://github.com/docs-test/LoopFollow/actions](https://github.com/docs-test/LoopFollow/actions)
 

docs/remote/remote-control-overview.md

@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ If you do not have APNS credentials, you need to create a key and grant it acces
     This only works with the **paid** Apple Developer ID.
 
 !!! warning "*Apple* changed the APN system"
-    *Apple* changed the way APN are created. Your old ones should still work, but it they don't, create new ones and update all the places where they are used.
+    *Apple* changed the way APN are created. Your old ones should still work, but if they don't, create new ones and update all the places where they are used.
 
     When creating new APN keys, you have the option for "Sandbox", "Production" or "Sandbox & Production". Be sure to choose "Sandbox & Production".
 

docs/remote/remote-control-trio.md

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ The Remote Settings row in the *LoopFollow* Settings screen is used to select th
 ![LoopFollow remote settings type](img/lf-trc-selection.jpg){width="300"}
 {align="center"}
 
-!!! warning "The *Trio* Remote Contol option is not available"
+!!! warning "The *Trio* Remote Control option is not available"
     The `Trio Remote Control` option is only available in *LoopFollow* if you have already entered a [*Nightscout* URL](#add-nightscout) with a default profile recognized as a *Trio* profile. Review [Troubleshooting](#troubleshooting) for possible reasons for not seeing the option.
 
 * *Nightscout* option

docs/setup/lf-features.md

@@ -65,40 +65,40 @@ To clarify the selection process, the graphic below shows 3 choices for Tab Sett
 
 ## Background Refresh Settings
 
-LoopFollow has traditionally provided an option to play a silent audio as a trick to allow it to wake up when in the background or when the phone is locked. This has several drawbacks including battery drain and limited reliability.
+*LoopFollow* has traditionally provided an option to play a silent audio as a trick to allow it to wake up when in the background or when the phone is locked. This has several drawbacks including battery drain and limited reliability.
 
-With LoopFollow version 2.2.9 or newer, an additional method is provided using an external device to provide a heartbeat. This can be a radiolink device, if you have one available, or a used Dexcom Transmitter (G5/ G6/ ONE/ Anubis) or Sensor (G7/ ONE+). The batteries on Dexcom devices continue to provide power to the Bluetooth system, giving a heartbeat at about 5 minute intervals. The radiolink devices provide a heartbeat every minute.
+With *LoopFollow* version 2.2.9 or newer, an additional method is provided using an external device to provide a heartbeat. This can be a radiolink device, if you have one available, or a used Dexcom Transmitter (G5/ G6/ ONE/ Anubis) or Sensor (G7/ ONE+). The batteries on Dexcom devices continue to provide power to the Bluetooth system, giving a heartbeat at about 5 minute intervals. The radiolink devices provide a heartbeat every minute.
 
 ### Bluetooth Heartbeat
 
 #### Why was this added?
 
-LoopFollow can use a background silent audio to keep iOS from killing the app, but this trick puts an extra load on the phone battery and it is known to stop working in some cases, such as when using a Timer on your phone
+*LoopFollow* can use a background silent audio to keep iOS from killing the app, but this trick puts an extra load on the phone battery and it is known to stop working in some cases, such as when using a Timer on your phone
 
 * If the silent tune is working well for you, there’s no need to change
-* If you’ve been experiencing significant battery drain you may want to use a Bluetooth Hearbeat
+* If you’ve been experiencing significant battery drain you may want to use a Bluetooth Heartbeat
 
 #### How does it work?
 
 * You can choose to use a radiolink device or an expired Dexcom device as a heartbeat
-* This can save significantly on the battery used by LoopFollow and provides more reliable ability to wake up LoopFollow out of background mode to check for alarm status.
+* This can save significantly on the battery used by *LoopFollow* and provides more reliable ability to wake up *LoopFollow* out of background mode to check for alarm status.
 
 #### What devices are supported?
 
-These devices can provide a constant Bluetooth connection for your LoopFollow phone:
+These devices can provide a constant Bluetooth connection for your *LoopFollow* phone:
 
 * Radiolink:  RileyLink, OrangeLink,  Emalink
 * Dexcom Device (the battery can last for months after it is no longer in service with a sensor)
     * Dexcom G5/G6/ONE/Anubis transmitter
     * Dexcom G7/ONE+ sensor
 
-If you use LoopFollow on your Looping phone for the features offered, you can connect to your own Dexcom device. You don’t need to use an expired device in addition.
+If you use *LoopFollow* on your Looping phone for the features offered, you can connect to your own Dexcom device. You don’t need to use an expired device in addition.
 
 #### How do I configure Bluetooth Heartbeat?
 
 These graphics walk you through how to select the Background Refresh Type.  The example shows the steps if you choose to use a Dexcom Device (G5/G6/ONE/G7/ONE+). A similar process is used for a radiolink device.
 
-If the person using LoopFollow is also wearing a Dexcom or radiolink, they should choose their own device. The RSSI is a measure of the strength of the signal. It is normal for the Dexcom device to disconnect. It will reconnect regularly.
+If the person using *LoopFollow* is also wearing a Dexcom or radiolink, they should choose their own device. The RSSI is a measure of the strength of the signal. It is normal for the Dexcom device to disconnect. It will reconnect regularly.
 
 🚧 import graphics from lnl 🚧
 
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ Updated Method for Watch Display of Real Time Glucose.
 
 Follow your Looper’s glucose value in real time on your Apple watch by adding a complication! 
 
-> Note: a new method is required because the old “calendar” method no longer works for iOS 18. You must have LoopFollow v2.2.8 or newer to use this method.
+> Note: a new method is required because the old “calendar” method no longer works for iOS 18. You must have *LoopFollow* v2.2.8 or newer to use this method.
 
 Features include:
 
@@ -119,18 +119,18 @@ Features include:
 
 ### Step-by-Step Instructions
 
-It is probably easiest to view the video for Set Up LoopFollow Contact Complication on Your Apple Watch, but a bullet list is also provided below
+It is probably easiest to view the video for Set Up *LoopFollow* Contact Complication on Your Apple Watch, but a bullet list is also provided below
 
 Video, [How to add a complication for real-time watch display](https://youtu.be/xQ6pd80tKT4)
 
 Bullet List with Instructions:
 
-1. Enable glucose Updates in Loop Follow
-    * Open the Loop Follow app on your iPhone
+1. Enable glucose Updates in *LoopFollow*
+    * Open the *LoopFollow* app on your iPhone
     * Go to Settings > Integrations > Contact
     * Toggle on “Enable Contact BG Updates”
-        * If a permission prompt appears, tap “Allow” to let Loop Follow access your contacts
-        * (The app will automatically create a contact named LoopFollow – BG for you.)
+        * If a permission prompt appears, tap “Allow” to let *LoopFollow* access your contacts
+        * (The app will automatically create a contact named *LoopFollow* – BG for you.)
 2. Open the Watch App
     * On your iPhone, open the Watch app
     * Tap “My Watch” at the bottom, if it isn’t already selected
@@ -140,12 +140,12 @@ Bullet List with Instructions:
 4. Customize the Complications
     * Tap the watch face you selected to edit its settings
     * Find a Complication slot where you want the glucose contact to appear
-    * Select the slot, select the ‘Contacts’ complication, select ‘More…’, scroll through the contacts, and choose LoopFollow – BG
+    * Select the slot, select the ‘Contacts’ complication, select ‘More…’, scroll through the contacts, and choose *LoopFollow* – BG
 5. Save Your Watch Face
     * Tap “Add” or “Set as Current Watch Face” to apply the changes
-    * Check your Apple Watch to confirm the LoopFollow – BG complication is showing your glucose data
+    * Check your Apple Watch to confirm the *LoopFollow* – BG complication is showing your glucose data
 6. (OPTIONAL) If you follow more than one Looper
-    * Repeat these steps. You can follow up to 3 Loopers using the various LoopFollow-1….-3 builds
+    * Repeat these steps. You can follow up to 3 Loopers using the various *LoopFollow*-1….-3 builds
     * Each contact will have a distinct name and show up with a different color on your watch face
 
 You’re ready to monitor your glucose data directly on your Apple Watch!