Use "it" in 2 places on order page to avoid repetition

[Hexstream]

MDN URL

https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/CSS/order

What specific section or headline is this issue about?

Syntax

What information was incorrect, unhelpful, or incomplete?

This should probably be just one sentence:

Since order is only meant to affect the visual order of elements and not their logical or tab order. order must not be used on non-visual media such as speech.

Like this:

Since order is only meant to affect the visual order of elements and not their logical or tab order, it must not be used on non-visual media such as speech.

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I would use "it" here too to avoid repetition:

When order is set on an element whose parent's display property is not creating a flex or grid container, the order property has no effect.

Like this:

When order is set on an element whose parent's display property is not creating a flex or grid container, it has no effect.

What did you expect to see?

Less repetition.

Do you have any supporting links, references, or citations?

No response

Do you have anything more you want to share?

No response

MDN metadata

Page report details

• Folder: en-us/web/css/order
• MDN URL: https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/docs/Web/CSS/order
• GitHub URL: https://github.com/mdn/content/blob/main/files/en-us/web/css/order/index.md
• Last commit: 3928d2b
• Document last modified: 2024-07-23T19:02:11.000Z

[Hexstream]

I am extremely confused.

What is the point of reiterating my own proposal to me except in worse formatting?

Is this AI-generated?

[Josh-Cena]

I don't see anything other than your post. Perhaps you saw a response that was deleted? This often happens when someone clicks quote reply but didn't type anything.

[Hexstream]

It seems a mod has deleted that message, didn't you get an email notification for it?

(edit: Come to think of it, they may have deleted their own message... 😅)

Here it is:

[Josh-Cena]

Indeed, I don't have email notifications on. Would have generated hundreds of emails each day then.