Description
Document Path
grammar_test/embed-with-bgm-m3.md
Analysis Result
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Issue: Awkward phrasing
Location: Line 2
Original: "BGE M3 is named for its capabilities in Multi-Linguality, Multi-Functionality, and Multi-Granularity."
Suggestion: "BGE M3 is named for its capabilities in multilingualism, multifunctionality, and multi-granularity." -
Issue: Redundant phrasing
Location: Line 4
Original: "BGE-M3 sets new benchmarks in multi-lingual and cross-lingual retrieval tasks."
Suggestion: "BGE-M3 sets new benchmarks in multilingual and cross-lingual retrieval tasks." -
Issue: Awkward phrasing
Location: Line 5
Original: "Its unique ability to perform dense retrieval, multi-vector retrieval, and sparse retrieval within a single framework makes it an ideal choice for a wide range of information retrieval (IR) applications."
Suggestion: "Its unique ability to perform dense, multi-vector, and sparse retrieval within a single framework makes it an ideal choice for a wide range of information retrieval (IR) applications." -
Issue: Chinglish expression
Location: Line 8
Original: "This class handles the computation of embeddings and returns them in a format compatible with Milvus for indexing and searching."
Suggestion: "This class computes embeddings and returns them in a format compatible with Milvus for indexing and searching." -
Issue: Redundant phrasing
Location: Line 10
Original: "To use this feature, FlagEmbedding must be installed."
Suggestion: "To use this feature, you must install FlagEmbedding." -
Issue: Awkward phrasing
Location: Line 13
Original: "Then, instantiate the BGEM3EmbeddingFunction:"
Suggestion: "Next, instantiate the BGEM3EmbeddingFunction." -
Issue: Inconsistent formatting
Location: Line 16
Original: "- model_name (string)"
Suggestion: "- model_name (string)" -
Issue: Inconsistent formatting
Location: Line 18
Original: "- device (string)"
Suggestion: "- device (string)" -
Issue: Inconsistent formatting
Location: Line 20
Original: "- use_fp16 (bool)"
Suggestion: "- use_fp16 (boolean)" -
Issue: Awkward phrasing
Location: Line 23
Original: "The expected output is similar to the following:"
Suggestion: "The expected output resembles the following:" -
Issue: Awkward phrasing
Location: Line 26
Original: "The expected output is similar to the following:"
Suggestion: "The expected output resembles the following:"
Overall, the text contains several instances of awkward phrasing, redundancy, and inconsistent formatting that can be improved for clarity and professionalism.
Suggested Action
Please make corresponding modifications and optimizations to the documentation based on the above analysis results.