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* The render duration of the first media object of each equally numbered MOQT
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Group, after decoding, MUST have overlapping presentation time.
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A consequence of this restriction is that a MSF receiver SHOULD be able to
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A consequence of this restriction is that an MSF receiver SHOULD be able to
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cleanly switch between time-aligned media tracks at group boundaries.
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## Content protection and encryption {#contentprotection}
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| audiodescription | An audio description for visually impaired users |
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| video | Visual content |
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| audio | Audio content |
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| mediatimeline | A MSF media timeline {{mediatimelinetrack}} |
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| eventtimeline | A MSF event timeline {{eventtimelinetrack}} |
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| mediatimeline | An MSF media timeline {{mediatimelinetrack}} |
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| eventtimeline | An MSF event timeline {{eventtimelinetrack}} |
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| caption | A textual representation of the audio track |
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| subtitle | A transcription of the spoken dialogue |
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| signlanguage | A visual track for hearing impaired users. |
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* A delta update catalog MUST contain at least one instance of Add tracks
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{{addtracks}}, Remove tracks {{removetracks}} or Clone Tracks {{clonetracks}}
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fields and MAY contain more. It MUST NOT contain an instance of a Tracks
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{{tracks}} field or a MSF version {{msfversion}} field.
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{{tracks}} field or an MSF version {{msfversion}} field.
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* The Add, Delete and Clone operations are applied sequentially in the order they
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are declared in the document. Each operation in the sequence is applied to the
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target document; the resulting document becomes the target of the next operation.
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# Workflow
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## Initiating a broadcast
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A MSF publisher MUST publish a catalog track object before publishing any media
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An MSF publisher MUST publish a catalog track object before publishing any media
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track objects.
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## Ending a live broadcast

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