Merge pull request #76 from gplssm/review/#71-language

Fix #71

Author: gplssm

_data/_partners.yml

@@ -1,25 +1,25 @@
 - name: DLR Institute of Networked Energy Systems
   logo: Partnerlogo_DLR.svg
-  description: The DLR Institute of Networked Energy Systems, Department of Energy Systems Analysis, develops open source tools for cross-sectoral energy systems planning. The institute has a strong expertise in open source modelling of power and gas grid infrastructures. Among other activities, DLR will provide within the project methods and data for the optimal allocation of power-to-gas plants and techniques for complexity reduction of cross-sectoral energy systems.
+  description: The DLR Institute of Networked Energy Systems, Department of Energy Systems Analysis, develops open-source tools for cross-sectoral energy systems planning. The institute has a strong expertise in open-source modeling of power and gas grid infrastructures. Among other activities, DLR will provide methods and data for the optimal allocation of power-to-gas plants and techniques for complexity reduction of cross-sectoral energy systems.
   url: https://www.dlr.de/ve/desktopdefault.aspx/tabid-12471/21741_read-49802/
 - name: University of Flensburg
   logo: Partnerlogo_EUF.svg
-  description: The Europa-Universität Flensburg (EUF), as a part of the Center for Sustainable Energy Systems (ZNES), contributes to the extension of the existing open source power system planning tools with regard to sector integration with a focus on the heat sector. The EUF can rely on expertise in open source modelling, energy economics and heat sector mapping. As part of its work, the EUF will, among other activities, provide high-resolution spatial and temporal heat demand data.
+  description: The Europa-Universität Flensburg (EUF), as a part of the Center for Sustainable Energy Systems (ZNES), contributes to the extension of the existing open-source power system planning tools with regard to sector integration with a focus on the heat sector. The EUF can rely on expertise in open-source modeling, energy economics and heat sector mapping. As part of its work, the EUF will, among other activities, provide high-resolution spatial and temporal heat demand data.
   url: https://www.uni-flensburg.de/eum/
 - name: Universtity of Applied Sciences Flensburg
   logo: Partnerlogo_HSFL.svg
   description: The Flensburg University of Applied Sciences (FUAS) is part of the Center for Sustainable Energy Systems (ZNES). It provides valuable expertise in modeling and planning of sub-transmission and transmission grids including the development and application of methods for complexity reductions. Furthermore, the FUAS can build on profound knowledge in processing data for energy system modeling.  In the context of eGo<sup>n</sup>, the FUAS works on the expansion of the grid planning tool focusing on the high and extra-high voltage level. This includes the integration of e-mobility and advanced electrical flexibilities. Additionally, the FUAS is in charge of the overall project coordination.
   url: https://hs-flensburg.de/forschung/fue/forschungsprojekte/egon
 - name: Fraunhofer Institute for Energy Economics and Energy System Technology
   logo: Partnerlogo_IEE.svg
-  description: The Fraunhofer Institute for Energy Economics and Energy System Technology IEE in Kassel researches for the national and international transformation of energy supply systems. The IEE provides data for studies about sector coupling (e.g. time series) and algorithms to reduce the complexity of models. These are based on experiences made in former projects. In addition, the IEE will validate new solutions created during the eGo<sup>n</sup> project.
+  description: The Fraunhofer Institute for Energy Economics and Energy System Technology IEE in Kassel researches does research for the national and international transformation of energy supply systems. The IEE provides data for studies about sector coupling (e.g. time series) and algorithms to reduce the complexity of models. These are based on experiences made in former projects. In addition, the IEE will validate new solutions created during the eGo<sup>n</sup> project.
   url: https://www.iee.fraunhofer.de/
 - name: University of Magdeburg
   logo: Partnerlogo_OvGU.svg
-  description: The research group for theoretical computer science of Otto-von-Guericke-University Magdeburg (OvGU) uses its expertise in software engineering and open source software development to improve the Open Energy Database and the Open Energy Platform in order to open up new application areas and widen their user community. The OvGU's expertise in efficient artificial intelligence methods will be used to improve the scalability of the eGo tool to adapt to the increased complexity entailed by extending it to multiple sectors.
+  description: The research group for theoretical computer science of Otto-von-Guericke-University Magdeburg (OvGU) uses its expertise in software engineering and open-source software development to improve the Open Energy Database and the OpenEnergyPlatform in order to open up new application areas and widen their user community. The OvGU's expertise in efficient artificial intelligence methods will be used to improve the scalability of the eGo tool to adapt to the increased complexity entailed by extending it to multiple sectors.
   url: https://forschung-sachsen-anhalt.de/project/offenes-netzebenen-sektorenuebergreifendes-23206
 - name: Reiner Lemoine Institut
   logo: Partnerlogo_RLI.svg
-  description: The Reiner Lemoine Institut (RLI) brings competence in planning of distribution grids, modeling of synthetic distribution grid topologies, and (geo-)data processing to the project. The RLI has a strong focus on the distribution grid part and is responsible for providing charging profiles of battery-electric vehicles, developing sector-coupled distribution planning methods and leads case studies that will be conducted with the developed tools.
+  description: Reiner Lemoine Institut (RLI) contributes its competence in planning of distribution grids, modeling of synthetic distribution grid topologies, and (geo-)data processing to the project. RLI has a strong focus on the distribution grid part and is responsible for providing charging profiles of battery-electric vehicles, developing sector-coupled distribution planning methods and leads case studies that will be conducted with the developed tools.
   url: https://reiner-lemoine-institut.de/egon/
 

_data/tools.yml

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 - name: eTraGo
-  description: The open source tool eTraGo optimizes grid and storage expansion on the German 380, 220 and 110 kV voltage levels for future power system designs.
+  description: The open-source tool eTraGo optimizes grid and storage expansion on the German 380, 220 and 110 kV voltage levels for future power system designs.
   logo: etrago_logo.png
   link: https://etrago.readthedocs.io
   links: 
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
     name: "Docs"
     icon: noun_Book_3324965.svg
 - name: eGo
-  description: With eGo, an integrated optimization of flexibility options and grid extension is assessed by linking transmission grid planning of [eTraGo](https://etrago.readthedocs.io) with distribution grid of [eDisGo](https://edisgo.readthedocs.io) planning.
+  description: With eGo, an integrated optimization of flexibility options and grid extension is assessed by linking transmission grid planning of [eTraGo](https://etrago.readthedocs.io) with distribution grid planning of [eDisGo](https://edisgo.readthedocs.io).
   logo: Toollogo_eGo3.svg
   link: https://openego.readthedocs.io
   links: 
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
     name: "Docs"
     icon: noun_Book_3324965.svg
 - name: eDisGo
-  description: A distribution grid planning tool based on PyPSA. It offers automatized grid reinforcement, battery integration, grid-supportive curtailment, and can deal with time series.
+  description: A distribution grid planning tool based on PyPSA. It offers automatized grid reinforcement, battery integration, grid-supportive curtailment and can deal with time series.
   logo: Toollogo_eDisGo.svg
   link: https://edisgo.readthedocs.io
   links: 

pages/pages-root-folder/index.md

@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ header: no
     </div>
     <div class="hero__left large-7 columns">
       <p class="hero__subheader">
-        Driven by the expansion of renewable generation capacity and the progressing electrification of other energy sectors, the electrical grid increasingly faces new challenges: fluctuating supply by renewable energy and simultaneously a changing demand pattern caused by sector coupling. However, the integration of non-electric sectors such as gas, heat and e-mobility enables more flexibility options. 
-        This project aims to investigate the effects of sector coupling on the electrical grid and the benefits of new flexibility options. Like the previous project <a href="https://openegoproject.wordpress.com" title="open_eGo">open_eGo</a> this work will follow the open source and open data principles.
+        Driven by the expansion of renewable generation capacity and the progressing electrification of other energy sectors, the electrical grid increasingly faces new challenges: fluctuating supply of renewable energy and simultaneously a changing demand pattern caused by sector coupling. However, the integration of non-electric sectors such as gas, heat and e-mobility enables more flexibility options. 
+        This project aims to investigate the effects of sector coupling on the electrical grid and the benefits of new flexibility options. Like the previous project <a href="https://openegoproject.wordpress.com" title="open_eGo">open_eGo</a>, this work will follow the open-source and open-data principles.
       </p>
       <div class="hero__btn">
         <a href="/tools_data/" class="button hero__cta">See our tools</a>
@@ -42,13 +42,13 @@ header: no
         <div class="tasks__item medium-6 columns">
           <div class="tasks__item-text">
             <h3 class="tasks__item-title">Sector Coupling</h3>
-            We want to identify the opportunities and potentials, but also challenges of progressing sector coupling and optimize the modelled energy system with regard to the overall costs.
+            We want to identify the opportunities and potentials, but also challenges of progressing sector coupling. We also want to optimize the modelled energy system with regard to the overall costs.
           </div>
         </div>
         <div class="tasks__item medium-6 columns">
           <div class="tasks__item-text">
             <h3 class="tasks__item-title">Planning Tool</h3>
-            In eGo<sup>n</sup> we will expand the grid planning tool eGo following the established open-source principles. We will connect the electrical grid with additional sectors and integrate more electrical flexibilities.
+            In eGo<sup>n</sup>, we will expand the grid planning tool eGo following the established open-source principles. We will connect the electrical grid with additional sectors and integrate more electrical flexibilities.
           </div>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ header: no
         <div class="tasks__item medium-6 columns">
           <div class="tasks__item-text">
             <h3 class="tasks__item-title">Open Data / Open Source</h3>
-            We will follow open source and open data principles by exclusively using input data which is freely available and publish own results under open source and open data licenses. 
+            We will follow open-source and open-data principles by exclusively using input data which is freely available and publish own results under open-source and open-data licenses. 
           </div>
         </div>
       </div>

pages/publications.md

@@ -5,4 +5,4 @@ permalink: "/publications/"
 header: no
 ---
 
-We'll keep you updated with latest publications and slides from talks we gave. Until these are available, feel free to read our [publications](https://openegoproject.wordpress.com/publications/) from open_eGo.
+We'll keep you updated with the latest publications and slides from talks we gave. Until these are available, feel free to read our [publications](https://openegoproject.wordpress.com/publications/) from open_eGo.

pages/tools+data.md

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ header: no
   <section class="tools-data__header row row__wrap">
     <div class="columns">
       <p class="tools-data__subheading">
-        In the context of <a href="https://openegoproject.wordpress.com">open_eGo</a>, several models and applications have been developed resulting in a toolchain. These data and tools provide the basis for eGo<sup>n</sup>. The data and data models were created and processed in different modules named <i>data processing</i> and <i>ding0</i>. Additional external open source tools such as <i>osmTGmod</i> were applied. Two modular planning tools (<i>eTraGo</i> and <i>eDisGo</i>) focusing on different grid levels were developed. They are combined in the inter-grid-level planning tool eGo to investigate viable grid expansion scenarios. All data sets are open data and made available on the open energy database (oedb) as part of the open energy platform - <a href="https://openenergy-platform.org/">OEP</a>. The grid planning tools access the oedb to retrieve and store data. The codes of the developed tools are open source and available on <a href="https://github.com/openego">GitHub</a>. 
+        Several models and applications have been developed in context of the previous <a href="https://openegoproject.wordpress.com">open_eGo</a> project, resulting in a toolchain. These data and tools provide the basis for eGo<sup>n</sup>. The data and data models were created and processed in different modules named <i>data processing</i> and <i>ding0</i>. Additional external open-source tools such as <i>osmTGmod</i> were applied. Two modular planning tools (<i>eTraGo</i> and <i>eDisGo</i>) focusing on different grid levels were developed. They are combined in the inter-grid-level planning tool eGo to investigate viable grid expansion scenarios. All data sets are open data and available in the open energy database (oedb) as part of the open energy platform &mdash; <a href="https://openenergy-platform.org/">OEP</a>. The grid planning tools access the oedb to retrieve and store data. The codes of the developed tools are open source and available on <a href="https://github.com/openego">GitHub</a>. 
       </p>
     </div>
     <div class="columns tools-data__img">
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ header: no
     </div>
     <div class="columns tools-data__tools-text">
       <p>
-      Within open_eGo, we've created a family of three grid planning tools for integrated modeling of transmission and distribution grid level
+      Within open_eGo, we've created a family of three grid planning tools for integrated modeling of transmission and distribution grid level:
     </p>
     </div>
 
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ header: no
       <div class="row">
         <h2 class="tools-data__oep-heading">Open&shy;Energy&shy;Platform</h2>
         <p class="tools-data__oep-text">
-          The OpenEnergy Platform is an open data platform used by energy researchers to publish data in an accessible manner.
+          The OpenEnergyPlatform is an open-data platform used by energy researchers to publish data in an accessible manner.
         </p>
         <div class="tools-data__oep-btn">
           <a href="https://openenergy-platform.org/" class="button">Visit OEP</a>