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-          Our goal: ensure Terraform is handed over to a foundation.
+          Our goal: ensure Terraform is handed over to an open source foundation.
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             backwards-compatible - so that the existing code can drive value for
-            years to come;
+            years to come
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-          We ask HashiCorp to do the right thing by the community: donate Terraform to this foundation,
-          rather than going forward with the BSL license change. That way, instead of fracturing the community, 
-          we end up with a single, impartial, reliable home for Terraform where the whole community can come together 
-          to keep building this amazing ecosystem.
+          We ask HashiCorp to do the right thing by the community: instead of going forward with the BSL 
+          license change, donate Terraform to this foundation, and keep it under a truly open source license.
+          That way, instead of fracturing the community, we end up with a single, impartial, reliable home for 
+          Terraform where the whole community can come together to keep building this amazing ecosystem.
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