final tweaks

riastrad · riastrad · commit 7f030108cd77 · 2024-11-19T15:59:13.000+05:30
diff --git a/bin/dictionary-supplement.txt b/bin/dictionary-supplement.txt
@@ -7,7 +7,9 @@ redescribing
 Redescription
 Rorty's
 ironist
-joie de vivre
+joie
+de
+vivre
 anglosphere
 Pret
 naïvely
diff --git a/posts/2024/violence-and-derision.md b/posts/2024/violence-and-derision.md
@@ -37,6 +37,6 @@ But maybe that's the whole point? Main characters are not meant to be idealized
 
 In any case, this isn't a perfect book — so few are. But it is refreshingly devoid of cliché and interesting in its premise. Worth checking out if you happen to see it in a little library some day.
 
-[^1]: I have dreams some day of making an app where books I put into circulation can do like Foursquare checkins, but that is a project for a rainy day.
+[^1]: I have dreams some day of making an app where books I put into circulation can do, like, Foursquare check-ins and you can watch them move around in time and space. But that... is a project for another, more rainy day.
 [^2]: I plan to write about this trip in a separate post. Fear not.
 [^3]: I did preemptively put several books into the little library rotation before we moved, so I don't feel excessive guilt over taking this one out of circulation completely.
