Quick edit aoostar_wtr_pro_install.md (#2917)

* minor rewording to avoid passive voice and simplify sentences.

Author: sspencerwire

docs/guides/hardware/aoostar_wtr_pro_install.md

@@ -1,17 +1,17 @@
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 title: Installing Rocky Linux 10 on a AOOSTAR WTR PRO
 author: Neel Chauhan
-contributors:
+contributors: Steven Spencer
 tested_with: 10.0
 tags:
   - hardware
 ---
 
 ## Introduction
 
-The AOOSTAR WTR PRO is a low-power x86 NAS with four drive bays. It is a faster and cheaper alternative to the HPE ProLiant MicroServer. For instance the author bought one as their personal NAS.
+The AOOSTAR WTR PRO is a low-power x86 NAS with four drive bays. It is a faster and cheaper alternative to the HPE ProLiant MicroServer. For instance, the author bought one as their personal NAS.
 
-While the WTR PRO is designed to run standard Linux distributions, the Rocky Linux installer will not boot out-of-the-box on it. However, Rocky Linux can still be installed.
+While the design of the WTR PRO is to run standard Linux distributions, the Rocky Linux installer will not boot out-of-the-box on it. However, you can still install Rocky Linux.
 
 ## Prerequisites and assumptions
 
@@ -25,16 +25,16 @@ The following are the minimum requirements for using this procedure:
 
 First, we will boot from the USB.
 
-If an existing operating system is installed on the SSD, press `Delete` when turning on the WTR PRO. Navigate to **Save & Exit** and choose the USB.
+If an existing operating system is on the SSD, press `Delete` when turning on the WTR PRO. Navigate to **Save & Exit** and select the USB.
 
-When the USB is booted into the GRUB menu, select **Troubleshooting**:
+When you boot the USB into the GRUB menu, select **Troubleshooting**:
 
 ![GRUB Main Menu](../images/aoostar_1.png)
 
 Subsequently, select **Install Rocky Linux *VERSION* in basic graphics mode**:
 
 ![GRUB Troubleshooting Menu](../images/aoostar_2.png)
 
-Now, Rocky Linux should boot and install as normal.
+Rocky Linux should now boot and install as normal.
 
-Keep in mind that when Rocky Linux is installed, no special kernel options are required.
+Note that there is no requirement for special kernel option when installing Rocky Linux.