minor version clarifications

Author: nazunalika

docs/rocky/version.md

@@ -108,8 +108,8 @@ Major releases for Rocky Linux are expected to be built and released when they a
 
 A release or version of Rocky Linux is considered unsupported if:
 
-* The Rocky Linux minor version has been superseded by another release *or*
-* The Rocky Linux release is End of Life
+* The Rocky Linux minor version has been superseded by a new minor version release *or*
+* The Rocky Linux release/major version is End of Life
 
 See below for examples of unsupported releases.
 
@@ -118,17 +118,17 @@ See below for examples of unsupported releases.
 When a new Rocky Linux minor release arrives in May/November, the following is true:
 
 * The previous version is no longer supported by Release Engineering and the community
-* This version is no longer updated and is moved to the [vault](http://dl.rockylinux.org/vault/rocky/).
-* This version **does not** receive bug fix nor security updates.
-* You are recommended to update your system with `dnf update`.
+* The previous version is no longer updated and is moved to the [vault](http://dl.rockylinux.org/vault/rocky/).
+* The previous version **does not** receive bug fix nor security updates.
+* **You are recommended to update your system with** `dnf update`.
 
 ### Example: An End of Life Release
 
-When a Rocky Linux release has reached its End of Life date typically after ten (10) years (for example, May of 2029), the following is true:
+When a Rocky Linux release has reached its End of Life date typically after ten (10) years, the following is true:
 
-* The release is no longer supported in full by Release Engineering and the community
-* The final version is moved to the [vault](http://dl.rockylinux.org/vault/rocky/).
-* This release no longer receives updates and thus no longer supported.
+* The major version/release is no longer supported in full by Release Engineering and the community
+* The final version of that release is moved to the [vault](http://dl.rockylinux.org/vault/rocky/).
+* This release no longer receives updates **and is no longer supported**.
 * You are recommended to install a supported Rocky Linux version and migrate your data.
 
 If you cannot install a new system and migrate and you still need support for your system or systems, you may be able to find a support provider.