Various improvements to grammar and formatting#2635
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Updated wording for clarity and accuracy regarding 3DS online services shutdown.
Correct capitalization and punctuation for consistency throughout the document.
Corrected the wording from 'onto' to 'on' for clarity.
Updated language for clarity and consistency throughout the document.
Updated formatting for clarity and consistency in instructions.
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Great changes, most things LGTM! See comments for a few stylistic changes (in particular, please don't change section names).
| **Custom firmware** (CFW) is a full software modification to your 3DS, comparable to "administrator access" on a computer. It allows you to do anything that the 3DS is physically capable of doing, rather than being limited by whatever Nintendo allows you to do. | ||
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| Popular uses for custom firmware include: | ||
| ### Popular uses for custom firmware include: |
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I don't think this really makes much sense as a header/h3?
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Would h4 be better? Or maybe just bold text?
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| This guide will: | ||
| + Install **boot9strap** and **Luma3DS custom firmware** on unmodified retail 3DS/2DS consoles | ||
| **This guide will:** |
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Bolding isn't strictly necessary here
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I think it looks better that way. Or maybe it could be a level 3 or 4 header.
| + **A black screen that says "An error has occurred"**: Your file placement is incorrect. Ensure that the Super-skaterhax files are on the root of the SD card. | ||
| + **A yellow screen**: Homebrew Launcher failed to open due to random chance. Hold the POWER button until the console turns off, then retry this section. | ||
| + **[The word "Text"](/images/screenshots/skaterhax/skater-old3ds.png)**: You have an Old 3DS, where this exploit **does not work**. If this is the case, you should follow [MSET9](installing-boot9strap-(mset9)) instead. | ||
| 1. Launch _nimdsphax_ from the list of homebrew |
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I'm not really against this change but italics are not generally used for exploit names or anything elsewhere
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Would bold or code be better? Or maybe it could be in quotation marks.
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I improved the grammar and formatting, and added some clarifications.