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README.md

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-## JoyID Passkey Wallet Telegram Mini App Demo 
+# JoyID Passkey Wallet Telegram Mini App Demo 
 
 **Please open telegram to find the [JoyIDBot](https://t.me/JoyIDBot) to experience the miniapp in Testnet**
 
-This Bot is designed for developers, showcasing how to integrate the [JoyID Passkey Wallet](https://joy.id/) into your miniapp. With our solution, users can seamlessly use decentralized wallets, accessing miniapp services without any barriers. 
+This Bot is designed for developers, showcasing how to integrate the [JoyID Passkey Wallet](https://joy.id/) into your telegram mini
+app. With our solution, users can seamlessly use decentralized wallets, accessing mini app services without any barriers. 
+
+We strongly recommend you to read the [telegram bot documentation](https://core.telegram.org/bots) to know what is telegram bot and telegram mini app first.
 
 ### Quick Start
 
@@ -14,7 +17,7 @@ pnpm install
 
 2. Update `CALLBACK_SERVER_URL` and `JOYID_APP_URL` in `env/index.ts`
 
-> The `CALLBACK_SERVER_URL` is your own server url and detailed information will be shown below
+> The `CALLBACK_SERVER_URL` is your own server url like the `https://api.example.com/bot/api/v1/` and the more information is provided below.
 
 3. Build and Test
 
@@ -23,29 +26,29 @@ pnpm build
 pnpm test
 ```
 
-### Quick custom your own mini app 
+## Build Your Own Telegram Mini App 
 
 Before starting the next tutorial, [Telegram Apps Integration](https://docs.joy.id/guide/applications/telegram) will help you become familiar with the telegram mini app development framework with JoyID Passkey Wallet.
 
-#### Build JoyID URL
+### Build JoyID URL
 
 Telegram's internal bots and mini-apps restrict certain client side capabilities, such as WebSocket and Passkey, which are essential for comprehensive wallet functionality. 
 
-So we must use an external browser to implement WebAuthn registration and login, which are also the core functions of JoyID Passkey Wallet and `@joyid/miniapp` will help you to build URL to connect wallet, sign messages and send Ethereum transactions with JoyID Passkey Wallet.
+So we must use an external browser to implement WebAuthn registration and login, which are also the core functions of JoyID Passkey Wallet and [`@joyid/miniapp`](https://www.npmjs.com/package/@joyid/miniapp) will help you to build URL to connect wallet, sign messages and send Ethereum transactions with JoyID Passkey Wallet.
 
-You can find the functions as blow to build JoyID URL and the annotations will be helpful for you
+You can find the functions as blow to build JoyID URL and the annotations will be helpful for you.
 
 - [`buildConnectTokenAndUrl`](./src/helper/index.ts)
 - [`buildSignMsgTokenAndUrl`](./src/helper/index.ts)
 - [`buildSendTxTokenAndUrl`](./src/helper/index.ts)
 
-#### Build Your own Server
+### Build Your Own Server
 
 JoyID Passkey Wallet can obtain the necessary information from the above JoyID connection, signing and sending URL, but the mini app **CAN NOT** get results from JoyID Passkey Wallet directly, so the server is necessary.
 
 When the JoyID Passkey Wallet is connected, the message is signed and the Ethereum transaction is sent successfully, the JoyID Passkey Wallet will send the results to the server through an HTTP Post request, and the telegram mini app will get the results from the server through an HTTP Get request.
 
-The server must provide two APIs to receive results from JoyID Passkey Wallet and send results to telegram mini app.
+The server must provide two APIs to receive results from JoyID Passkey Wallet and send results to the telegram mini app.
 
 > You can find this mini app demo APIs [here](./src/api/index.ts)
 
@@ -65,7 +68,7 @@ The server must provide two APIs to receive results from JoyID Passkey Wallet an
 
 For example: 
 
-- The request of connection JoyID Passkey Wallet
+- The request of the connection with JoyID Passkey Wallet
 ```json
 {
   "token":"conncd6f828cfb86eba318e4f85733c9178fd6c7c45256034604f67463c36282d2cc9e4ab642",
@@ -80,7 +83,7 @@ For example:
 - method: GET
 - response: 
 
-```json
+```js
 {
   message: json string
 }
@@ -89,14 +92,14 @@ For example:
 
 - GET url: `{your_server_url}/messages/conncd6f828cfb86eba318e4f85733c9178fd6c7c45256034604f67463c36282d2ccc7dfd7f9`
 
-- The response of connection JoyID Passkey Wallet
+- The response of the connection with JoyID Passkey Wallet
 ```json
 {
   "message":"{\"address\":\"0x8ac36d0e764FF17dcF13b2465e77b4fe125EC2bC\"}"
 }
 ```
 
-#### Message Format
+### Message Format
 
 The message format is JSON string which you can put any information into the message and this mini app demo message is defined as follows:
 
@@ -117,7 +120,7 @@ The message format is JSON string which you can put any information into the mes
 "message":"{\"signature\":\"0xacf1fadf82f619fc5adc8bf956d0312a99f9915bf5b19e5c5e952485308d741347075a4a5d0c4fa8a8784b8ce79d6d68040e028aa1e7e7c5ee82c52bd1982e831b\"}"
 ```
 
-- Reject connection
+- Reject signing message
 ```json
 "message": "rejected"
 ```
@@ -127,7 +130,7 @@ The message format is JSON string which you can put any information into the mes
 "message":"{\"txHash\":\"0x287ac8d53570799d102791781142539613d1468a08c4cdf33b264554ba8b3069\"}"
 ```
 
-- Reject connection
+- Reject signing and sending transaction
 ```json
 "message": "rejected"
 ```